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As my world rotates

19:40 Jul 04 2007
Times Read: 797


As my life rotates

My emotions in a state

As I seeing what I could have been

Looking at my life through this broken video screen



I wish I was safe

Keeping the faith

I want to be risen on angel’s wings

But my heart will never sing



Broken from the pain

And I will never be the same

In this suitcase where my secrets are held

Blood dripping where it fell



But now my work is cast

As demon reemerge from my past

They will never let me be

Until I allow someone to see









COMMENTS

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Missfortuneate
Missfortuneate
11:07 Jan 24 2008

I love how it flows, and hope that in time things will work out for you.





evildollbj
evildollbj
11:09 Jan 31 2008

wow your realy good.





ByteMiAss
ByteMiAss
20:13 Feb 01 2008

wow.

why not write and stuff more in here?





xcrimsonlustx
xcrimsonlustx
16:11 Feb 12 2008

I like it! ;)=





spaz53
spaz53
15:38 Feb 20 2008

i love it so much!!!!!





gothhottie171
gothhottie171
19:21 Mar 01 2008

Very deep but i can defenitly relate!! even though what your saying isnt i think this is beautiful





AMANxGEKKANI
AMANxGEKKANI
19:57 Mar 08 2008

oh my, this is wonderful.

i dont know what you were thinking when you said you weren't good a writing, you are talented.

i would really wish to read more, tell me when you get more on VR.






aquababy62
aquababy62
11:33 Apr 06 2008

this ones realy good, try poetry,com, if they like iy when you inter there contest, they might publish it, they did one of mine in there book?!





missmasochist
missmasochist
19:11 Apr 27 2008

nicely done!





RavenLucifera666
RavenLucifera666
22:57 Apr 29 2008

I love it.





minikitti
minikitti
19:58 Apr 30 2008

i love your poems they are real good as your personal ones to espically of the guys wanting to sleep around





deamonfayrie
deamonfayrie
20:15 Jul 03 2008

pretty good.....your a talented writer





darkvampiregirl
darkvampiregirl
17:15 Jul 21 2008

i loved it





bloodytearsoflonlieness
bloodytearsoflonlieness
21:24 Aug 07 2008

hun i lovvve this one its .............idk the words to use

u can allow me to see





deathangelsdarkrose
deathangelsdarkrose
01:59 Jun 20 2009

i like it :)








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